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Review: Maddy and the Captain
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Well researched, but does it hold the reader?

Author: Jeannie Heppell

Published: Paperback, 29 January 2003 Lady Spring Publications.

ISBN: tba

Reviewer: Hazel Stevens

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Striking the right note

Jeannie Heppell cleverly takes on a classical style of writing in ‘Maddy and the Captain’.

The genre and this style befits the era before and during the First World War.

This is a seemingly pleasant tale of the upper classes and their desire to help the ‘war effort’.

Maddy, the main character, is taken from school, to falling in love and coming to Yorkshire to help out at Kelsay Park, a convalescence home for injured officers.

The first chapter, however, is a little confusing with the introduction of many characters. It took me a while to sort out who was who, but with this accomplished, I read on.

I was very disappointed to find a year in the life of Maddy had just been dismissed as a year at secretarial school. Whilst during that year, a lot more detail had been given about the lives of others.

Surely one whole year could not have lapsed without something happening to Maddy?

I am sorry to say when Maddy came to Yorkshire, I lost her the moment she left York Railway Station. I think Jeannie Heppell has missed out, through not writing more about York in that era.

Though she did give a lively description of the invasion of Scarborough, which included many places familiar to me.

After Maddy’s arrival at Kelsay Park, the story lost pace and, I’m sorry to say, my interest. Maddy felt imprisoned in Kelsay Park by the ‘interminable rain’ and that is how I felt, in some ways, about the story line.

Appraisal

It is well written in the genre of that time and with the changes in our language during the last century Jeannie Heppell must be congratulated on capturing this style so accurately.

I am just sorry her characters lack depth and the story line is so bland.

At this time I have lacked the motivation to read more than half way through the book, maybe one day I will finish it. Maybe I will be surprised and the story will move up a pace.

Commendation

A story, however, has to grab my whole attention in the first chapter.

I need to know the characters, empathise with them, be beguiled by them and most of all really care about, and want to know, what happens to them.

Sorry, Jeannie Heppell, but ‘Maddy and the Captain’ just didn't do that for me this time.

Review by: Hazel Stevens

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