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'The Cost of War'

A poetry competition organised by the Ulster Museum as part of its exhibition The Irish at War.

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Ulster Museum's Poetry Competition

The Ulster Museum as part of its The Irish at War exhibition in 2004, held a poetry competition entitled The Cost of War. The competition was open to young people aged 11 to 18 years.

The poems were judged by award winning poet Meadbh McGuckian

Two of the winners were Colin Funston and Kate McAtackney.

 Kate McAtackney with Meabdh McGuckian Colin Funston with Meabdh McGuckian
 Kate McAtackney with Meadbh McGuckian
Colin Funston with Meadbh McGuckian

 

Kate McAtackney's Poem:
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BETWEEN

Rested on a sack of stock, the soldier
Laid his worn head down, against the
Biting filth and the cutting cold.

The uniform once so proud and tall, lay
Shaken and cowering on the ground
With fresh wounds and old scars.

But, sleep befell the soul within, and
No more was he cast to hell, now
He lay on the summer's grass with Father

In his hand. "My boy, Tommy, my boy", he spoke
Love in his clean young ears. All was well, all was warm
On that day of childhood. "Tommy, my boy, Tommy", he

Spoke more clearly still. Now unrested
And unsettlement in
The quaking of his Father's voice.

Clutched! Grabbed! Expelled he was from
The summer's day. Glacial chill scratched his cheeks,
As his eyes whipped awake.

The screech penetrated flesh and thoughts
And the earth and sand
Stabbed his skin. "Soldier!", lashed his commander.

A towering figure of menace, "we're under attack,
Soldier, my boy.
Get up soldier, before another mortar hits".

And up he rose from
His nest of soil, gun pointing
Towards a sun setting.

By Kate McAtackney

 

Colin Funston's Poem

 

 

 

I ONCE KNEW A MAN WHO FOUGHT IN THE WAR…

Yellow-stained fingers and thumbs
Slowly build a cigarette.
This pathetic day of remorse kicked off
By empty chants of "Lest we forget".

He answered Ireland's call
He gave up mind and limb.
Now the bitch has turned her back
Like others; mocking him.

His husky voice coughs up phlegm
Which he washes down with rum.
An age ago girls blushed and smiled
Now away from him they run.

He answered Irelands call
Was it not for Direct rule?
But now like Punch, the history books
Present him as a fool.

Last week his basement home;
Smashed up by black veined plebs.
Now this killer the System made
Is scared to leave his bed.

He answered Ireland's call
About him they wrote songs.
But now the whore has changed her tune
And what was right's now wrong.

Wondering if he was actually there
In the pictures in those books.
A tommy defeating the Kaiser
Or a pawn feeding a Rook?

He answered Irelands call
Now his medals grind with rust.
God and Ulster were his love
But now they've betrayed his trust.

Is this the cost of war?
Condemnation for endeavour
To suck out the juicy life of man
And discard the peel forever?

By Colin Funston

 

YOUR RESPONSES

R M Smyth - July '05
Congratulations to the young poets. I found them to be quite profound,and with young people like this maybe Ireland can remove itself from the hatreds that unfortunately exist in that dear land across the Atlantic.

Meadbh - February '05
Hi Meadbh my name is spelt that way too, I am 11 & a half years old, just wanted to say hi!

 

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